My name is Joe, I live in China, I am a poor farmer. In this afternoon in the year 1212,  I like to pull weeds out of my fields. The other day I was quietly working on improving my crops when I heard a something that sounded like thunder. I looked up into the sky but it was crystal clear. I turn around ,and I see were the sound is coming from. In the distance I can see the  dreaded Mongols heading right toward us, and I see then banging on their huge drums. 
     I am paralyze with fear. The first thing that I thought of was my family. I went into the village and grabbed my family and we ran as fast and as far as we could. We found a small cave about a mile away from the village. We are shacking with fear. Everyone knows that the Mongols kill everything in sight. They kill all girl,boy, man, woman even dogs. We wait for hours and hours. We can hear the screams of others My family and I start getting hungry, but none of us dare go out side. We stay there for about a day,and until we don't hear anything else. We have survived an attack from the Mongols. We can see the mess they made dead bodies everywhere. We pack up whats left of our stuff and leave t move to the next town.      
Sylvya
12/14/2012 11:24:12 am

On the forth sentence it is space than , than word

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